Update

This week flew by quickly, Working on the second paper has gotten me ready to continue with writing about different topics and how to better my paper. So far everything is good and looking forward the midterm and whatevers in store for us.

Reflect

looking back to my first blog post i  noticed that  i failed to use alot of grammatical punctuations and i wrote alot. As the blog posts went on i realized i was writng less but also being more specific in less words. So far i feel that i gained more knowledge as far as writing and it will only get better.

Compare and Contrast

Writing the analsys essay to me was very easy because im writing abouut a piece that i agree with and with that i can easily point out my view and how it corresponds to the topic. the lietracy narrative was hard to wright becuase i wasnt familar with thtat writng style but imm sure my analysis paper would be  better.

Analyzing Advertisment

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1.) The purpose of this ad is to show the affiliation of athletes with major shoe trade marks.
2.) This ad attracts the attention of young athletes who play the game and people interested into the sport.
3.) The Genre of this ad is just like any company has a very famous person marketing their product.
4.) The tone of this ad shows the intensity and dedication of the sport. I believe the tone was chosen to attract players to get the product to better themselves and someday accomlish their dream.

Final Draft vs Rough Draft

When writing my final draft, I didn't have much to revise because i didn't have much errors on the rough draft. As far as my peer reviews there were very minor markings and punctuation corrections made and i generated the final draft very easily.