Difference between A & C Paper English 101-7

When writing a paper I think the major three differences between the grade of A & C are sentences structuring, details, and lastly the use of grammar and punctuation.

When your writing your paper sentence structures plays a big part because you don't want to loose your reader by confusing them. An a papers structuring usually has a rising action, falling action, resolution, and theme ext, and they all fall into place were on things leads to the next. A c paper would have most of those points but they will not be in order making the reader confused and stop reading.

Detail on a paper is what captures the readers attention. An a paper will include details as specific as the timing of when something takes places, descriptions of anything mentioned ,and wording that will enable to the reader to paint a picture in their mind. A c paper would lack of detail and just be plain making the paper bland. I know this part is very true because on previous papers that i have wrote i received a c for lack of detail and not being specific on many parts.

Lastly the most important part that affects the grade of a paper is the usage of grammar and the placation of punctuation marks. A a paper will have correct placing of punctuation as far as something as commas, periods, parenthesis, and apostrophes  These are important because they signal your paper when reading it aloud. A c paper would have punctuation placed in the wrong spots and are there for designs rather than importance. Some punctuation are harder to determine on where to be placed you just got to learn how to use them.

For me its easy to write in detail because i make the reader feel as if they were there and its a strong attention grabber and makes the person not want to put the piece of writing down. The hardest one for me is punctuation because i know where to place the common punctuation marks but then there's other marks that im not familiar with and i end up not using them which greatly affects the grade.

Blog Update101-7

This week of class went very good and quickly. Working on writing the first major essay of the class got me prepared of whats expected for the rest of the course. I met a few new people and so far everything is going great.

NEIU Writing I Assignment 2 101-7 Topic Ideas

The first possible topic I may be writing about is the consequences that I had to suffer for breaking school rules. I can remember many occasions in which I had punishments given to me the I felt were very heinous. As I look back at the mistakes I did some would consider them to be expected of a kid to do, on the other hand you have the more strict cold blooded person that will do anything in their power to torture you. As a kid experimenting is a full time job and something I feel that nobody should get punished for.

My second choice of topic is a life changing experience that I had. Growing up you start to realize that you have to set goals for yourself and over come many obstacles to succeed. As a high school student you try to make the day fly by because all you want to do is get in and out, homework and tests were on the bottom of your priority list and hanging out was on the top. I realized the mistake that I had made when it was time to take my college entrance exams and only had two weeks to prepare for it. If it wasn't for my sister who helped tutor me and show me the importance of this exam, I would have never been able to accomplish my goal.

Lastly, I might right about one of life's lesson which is karma. Honestly I never thought it really existed until the day that karma took its effect on me. In my situation I never meant to hurt anybody or anything it was just an at the moment typical human reaction. If it wasn't for this day I would be one of  the many people who would contradict the fact of its existence, in a way  im glad that I experienced it at a early stage in life because im able to look back at  the different situations ive been in.

Why am I taking English 101

                                                                                                                                        
Wuzgoin on everybody I'm Will. I'm taking this class because I want to improve they way I write papers. Most people that take this class need it because its required, in my case its true but at the same time I wanna take advantage of all the topics that were going to cover to help me progress my wring skills. English is not my favorite subject because I didn't do that great in my other English courses but I can honestly say my writing has improved from previous years. 


Will Anabtawi
English 101-7